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6 am by ~Motarea:iconMotarea:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


You’re such a bad influence, movies all night and up till sunrise
When’s the best time to turn out the lights?
Nowhere to turn, you’ve got me cornered
It’s 6 in the morning
And we’re finally saying goodnight.
Sharks induce the terrors of the night
All just an excuse to steal me away.
It’s 6 in the morning…
I don’t want to let go.
©2009 ~Motarea
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Author's Comments

Just a shorty...I can't seem to go any further with it, but that's ok, I like it anyway

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~Mightyninj4 Apr 8, 2009, 11:06:19 PM
yeah i think its fine how it is, sometimes being long is a bad thing, you got the point across

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"at first i just thought you were mentally disabled or something, but i've finally decided.. I just hate you"
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*Shmarky Apr 9, 2009, 11:39:26 AM
I agree with Mightyninj4,
Its short but sweet!
Well done!
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~Motarea Apr 9, 2009, 11:41:59 AM
Hehe, thanks babe <3

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::Supporting the troops, both Canadian and American over in the middle east.::
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"You look at me and think I'm weird, then I smile like none of this even matter, because behind the makeup and clothes, I could be just like you."
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~Motarea Apr 9, 2009, 11:42:31 AM
Its taking some getting used to, the short ones, but oh well, it's cute none the less...

thanks for the comment

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::Supporting the troops, both Canadian and American over in the middle east.::
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"You look at me and think I'm weird, then I smile like none of this even matter, because behind the makeup and clothes, I could be just like you."
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~Mightyninj4 Apr 9, 2009, 12:05:32 PM
no problem

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"at first i just thought you were mentally disabled or something, but i've finally decided.. I just hate you"
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~Lovinu Jun 21, 2009, 2:00:36 AM
hmmm...sounds like me...i'm always up til 6am...

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"There could be a million loves in your life. One should stand above all of the others." Wow, who know my brother actually has a sensitive side, he's not an ass hole 24/7. anyway...~Quinton's Senior Quote
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~Mariko1605 Jul 27, 2009, 10:17:58 AM
It may be short, but it has a lot of feeling in it. The emotion's what makes it awesome, not it's length.

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~Mariko

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"You know you're crazy when someone asks your friends what's wrong with you and they start counting on their fingers" - Kathleen
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~Motarea Aug 3, 2009, 10:09:38 AM
hehe, thanks love <3 hurray for short but cute :P

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::Supporting the troops, both Canadian and American over in the middle east.::
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"You look at me and think I'm weird, then I smile like none of this even matter, because behind the makeup and clothes, I could be just like you."
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